Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Big Paper Rough Draft

In our generation digitalization is a big part of our daily lives as teenagers as well as adults. Digital technology has been used so excessively that it is no longer just a part of our lives, just a digital device but a lifestyle. It makes up a lot of our lifestyles and the way we live, interact, spend our time, etc. Technology never leaves our side, I know me it never leaves my side as I always have my cell phone with me, other may always have their ipods with them, laptops, whatever is portable. We have come to think that digitalization is like something that releases endorphins, relaxes us, bring us happiness but looking beyond the screens on our televisions and computers and looking at the bigger picture it has been realized that our use of technology for happiness is false. Digitalization is the cause of our ignorance and make us oblivious to what is really going on such as brainwash, destruction of the environment, our health, our emotions. Addiction to digitalization is leading us deeper into the direction of ignorance and a lot of this can be caused by our need to conform with society.

It has been made pretty clear that we are addicted to technology, many of us do not know the extent that we are addicted. Before this digitalization unit I knew I was addicted to digitalization, but didn't know to what extent or what kind of negative effects it was having on myself and others. From what I know all teenagers are as addicted as I am. I cannot say that I am only addicted to one digital device because if I use all the technological devices at least once a day I am addicted to digitalization but I do know for a fact that I become more zoned out be certain digital devices then others, the cause of this can be our lack or realization of ourselves and other people. For example is the television. As a young child I was not able to watch an excessive amount of television as true "American" children. It was not until a later age in my childhood I started to discover the fake pleasure of watching television. From reading other people's blogs it was noticed that although we are all addicted to digitalization, everyone is addicted to different device a certain amount more. For example I spent way more time being distracted by the television then Yazmin P is since all her attention goes to her cell phone. Both of which effects our ability to socialize with people in person. She made it clear in her blog that she spends a lot of time out of her day being distracted by her texting. In her video she ignores a lot of what her mother is telling her because she is so distracted which has to be a big part of families falling apart. Even though we are different in which ever technology we are sucked into more with both experiences we have the same effect. One of which is disembodiment (when you are not in sink or realize what you think your body is really doing). Being distracted from reality and spending so much time on digitalization takes away from our ability to want to interact and improve charisma or social skill. This could be a really good reason why I am so socially awkward and I have trouble holding a good conversation with someone I am not super comfortable with.

Another example is my brother, although a smart and funny guy he never expresses this fact as he is so addicted to his digital pleasure of his computer/ video games (warcrafts). He would literally spend his WHOLE day sitting in front of the computer and would not get up from staring at the screen unless it was to use the bathroom or to get something to eat. This made the rest of my family and I never really get to know his inner emotions or what kind of personality he really has. I never was able to have a brother/sister sibling relationship as his relationship with his computer was more pleasurable it seems. If only he would realize and step away from what was causing his loved ones to miss him he could have been able to notice the people around him and his environment as well. These are examples of how little parts of our society falls apart, it starts with one person crumbling family social interactions. If only we would work on making friends instead of being friends with our digital device we can realize one real happiness of life which is the love of friends and families.

Digitalization does not only take away from our social skills but are all just brainwashing devices. I watch a lot of television, and when thinking of television it is filled with a bunch of commercials every minute. It makes it seem as if television devices are just away for companies to brainwash their products to you through your sense of vision. According to the article by Sarah Johnson, Average Person Watches 43 Ads each day it states that "According to Thinkbox, this means 2.45 billion ads are watched daily with a single person watching 43 ads each day." That is even WAY more then the population of people in the United States which is around 308 million. With all these different marketing made by digital media is raises questions about thing like privacy and how we do not realize how we can be effecting our health and rather spend it wasting our day being brainwashed by advertisements. We do not really notice how much advertisements we see, as if since it is there it is now a part of our daily lives a long with digitilization. Even when we are checking our emails which are supposedly private locked by a password, when sending emails, there are advertisements that pop up from highlighting certain words on an email. This makes me wonder how private our internet and cell phones really are.

A great example that mirrors this is the book Feed by MT Anderson. Feed is about a teenager boy living in the future, although this book may seem to be about the technology of the future it is actually a allegory of the present. In Feed everyone has microscopic digital chips implanted into their brains, these chips basically act as every kind of digital device we have in our present day such as cell phone, aim, shopping online, television, etc. The main character Titus dates a girl name Violet who does not come one with her Feed (digital chip) till she was in a later age, thus causing her downfall for her need to fit in with her friends and their addiction to their feeds. In the book Violet goes shopping with Titus and realized how the Feed is programed to market anything that seems of interest in your mind. This is like a mirror of our experiences with digital marketing through our internet and televisions as well. Every minute and every second there heads are poured with a bunch of advertisements for mostly useless items, this is like a mirror of a small part of the negative experiences we have with digitization.

Another could be the effects on our health and our environment. It effects our health, for example from my own experiences is that the addiction distracts my ability to be one with nature or have a healthy exercise pattern. Instead of going outside and having some fresh air (well not super fresh because of the pollution but its better then staying in the stuffy in doors)sometimes I feel more obligated to play video games or watch my favorite movie/show. I do not go out and exercise, I do not take walks and since technology distracts us from hanging out with friends it takes away being able to hang out and play games or take walks with friends. With the food unit helping the way I eat, it will not do anything without some form of exercise. Thus causing people sometimes to be overweight or unhealthy. Like in the movie Walle (one of my favorites) where all the human beings live on a ship, they do not need to walk, or even make food for themselves, they live in a digitilized society on a space ship causing them to be morbidly obeist and even unable to even walk. Also besides from computers and television we have other types of technology like cell phones that cause radiation and cars and such that cause pollution which effects the environment we live in. "When a city builds more roads to attract tourists, the result is more traffic, not less. Even things we take for granted such as the automobile have negative effect on us. Because the automobiles cause pollution and that can surely harm us slowly." (Negative Effects Of Modern Day Technology) A mirror of this is another example from the book Feed, in the book Violet speaks with the main characters father about taking a walk in one of the only parks in their society. Upon this conversation it is found out that the park and trees were cut down to build a air factory. This is ironic since trees are one of the main sources for air, its almost like killing cows to breed more cows to kill for food. We may not have air factories...yet but we sure have many aspects of digitilization that is quite similar to the effects it has on our health, society, and environment.

Although most of us babble about how technology is bad for us, there are those who do not admit that they actually enjoy it. Some just go along with the rant of "television is bad for our brains!" I know I in some cases do the same which would make me a hypocrite since I watch so much television. Some of which such as Johnson who wrote the text Everything Bad is Good For You refers to the "good" and the increase of intelligence rather then the deteriorating of digitization. He states how digital stimulation is actually good for a person's mind. It helps us learn how to notice patterns and helps our problem/puzzle solving skills. As i realize and analyze this concept a little more, bringing back my idea of my brother, he was an extremely great thinking and was really smart. I try to follow in his footsteps but obviously can never match up to his level of thinking but it is good enough for my own perspective. As good thinkers and problem solvers it would be a good point of Johnson's Everything Bad is Good For You that our good thinking and patterns solving skills is the cause of our "intelligence" but for myself personally I like video games but I do not obsess over it as much. I do not play every day but when I do plan on playing video games I am pretty damn good. So it could be that Johnson's has got it all backwards, those who are good at pattern solving and thinking are good at video games, and since they are good at video games they become addicted. It makes me think that my brothers extreme intelligence helps his ability to play video games thus giving him the confidence which caused him to be so addicted to his digital lifestyle. Although Johnson's text makes some really good points, with my own thoughts and experiences I must disagree with the whole idea of how our intelligence grows from digital stimulation.

Where I got my ideas/evidence so far.
-Personal Stuff
http://www.articlesbase.com/science-articles/negative-effects-of-modern-day-technology-1106666.html
-Feed/MT Anderson
-Everything Bad is Good For You
-Yazmin P's blog
-Sarah Johnson- http://www.marketingmagazine.co.uk/news/924735/Average-person-watches-43-ads-day/

2 comments:

  1. Hey Chloe,
    Your rough draft is very well written and you show a lot of strong points. I enjoy reading what you think about digitalization and it's affect on our community. I see a lot of strong examples in your paper and I like this. It seems to me your ideas broadened a whole lot within a couple of days. What I do think you should take a second look at is maybe talk about the alternative point of view to the situation such as keeping in touch with friends and family or how digitalization is helping technology grow therefore helping people. Other than that I think your paper is headed in a really good direction and I can't wait to read the final product : )

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  2. I did talk a little about a alternative point of view, it was just not a very good/ failed alternative point of view. :)
    <3

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